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| First Try at D&B I have been using Photoshop for a few years but never to retouch photographs. I would like to get an idea of what I should improve. I used the D&B technique that is explained in the tutorial section. I had some trouble when it came down to removing the little hair the grow above her upper lip and along the ridge of her nose. If anyone has suggestions upon how to do this with out blurring it would be helpful. Before After Michael Last edited by mschwartz; 01-24-2008 at 11:20 AM. Reason: add more info |
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| Re: First Try at D&B why did the after shot shift color? |
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| Re: First Try at D&B Although my monitor is not color calibrated. It seemed as if there was a green cast to the whole image therefore I applied a curves adjustment layer to get rid of the cast. Did I go to far with the curves layer and add a new color cast? |
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| Re: First Try at D&B Magenta City. |
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| Re: First Try at D&B Thank you for the help pointing out the color cast. If anyone would be nice enough to say in their opinion which areas of skin in the After image could use more work? |
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| Re: First Try at D&B You've done a good job getting rid of most of the obvious flaws. Now you need to dive in a little deeper and go for the less glaring blemishes. For example, go for the dark "dots" along her nose and on her right cheek. Also there appears to be some dark blotchiness near the part in her hair where I believe you healed away some stray hairs. Other than that just try to even out her skin tone in general, making sure that there aren't any sudden or blotchy shifts in shade. Also try to correct the color cast a bit and I think you'll be doing quite well! |
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| Re: First Try at D&B Thank you. I appreciate you taking your time to look at my work. |
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| Re: First Try at D&B ok you have the basics down, start trying to do more like enhancing the hair to low flawless and enhancing or adding makeup. i know try making her lips not so dry and scabby. i dare you to add a glossy lip and smokey eyes to her.!!!!!! go the distance!!! make me proud! |
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| Second Try at D&B This is my second try at the photo Second Try I worked to even out the skin. I burned in the eyeliner that she already had on ,add a curves layer to create glossy lips, tried to remove the color cast. I know I removed some from her hair. I really wanted to add new lower eyelashes but had a really hard times using any of the eyelash brush I found. I would really I appreciate it if someone could give me some advice about making the eyelash brush look more natural. Mine always looked painted on and flat. Michael |
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| Re: Second Try at D&B Quote:
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| Re: Second Try at D&B Quote:
just had to say that, sorry it has nothing to do with this thread |
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| Re: Second Try at D&B Quote:
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| Re: First Try at D&B I think the retouch itself is going good but the models face needs to be a bit brighter. I used a curve (picture attached below) for the whole image and used a masked softlight layer curve with a mild s curve to darken up the hair a bit. I did a quick retouch but hopefully this will give you an idea on where to start. and as far as the color I think it's just right, my sample is C:5, M:20, Y:23 on the forehead. The version you posted is heavily cast with magenta, you may want to look into a hardware calibrator. |
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| Re: First Try at D&B Adam, Thank you for the comments. I will definitely go back and lighten up the face and darken the hair. My next purchase is an Eye One calibrator to correct my monitor. |
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| Re: Second Try at D&B that are the lashes of mine tuturiol, I MADE THEM! you stole them, and act if they are yours. there stands copyright on it, didnt see it?! |
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