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Old 06-16-2008, 07:00 AM
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People Montage

just give me some feedback, as this is a pre-test for a shoot i'm preparing myself for

http://cacophoty.blogspot.com/2008/06/just-test.html

(focus on the guy(s), as this is my main object...later on everything will be different, especially the crowded background)

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Old 06-16-2008, 07:42 AM
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Re: People Montage

That's a fun concept, Stefan. I see it on a graffiti covered brick wall for a background.
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Old 06-16-2008, 11:45 AM
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Re: People Montage

Ha, ha! Cool idea!
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Old 06-16-2008, 08:32 PM
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Re: People Montage

I think it's quite good !
Good detail, good expressions from the guys, upper body very still as if imaginary.
The masking was good, no stray artifacts. The second guy is blended nicely, very real looking.
Overall, excellent work and certainly good enough for any professional work.
Good job !
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Old 06-25-2008, 05:37 PM
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Re: People Montage

thats a good edit and a novel idea!!
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Old 06-28-2008, 05:30 AM
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Re: People Montage

Wow I really like it !

I could not see any problem everything looks ok and create WOW effect!

I am planining making a photo shoot of b-boys breakdancers and I was thinking
smiliar concept for them I hope it goes well as yours

Please post the latest version too..
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Old 06-28-2008, 11:55 AM
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Re: People Montage

Very nice concept indeed!

The only thing I noted was the shadow cast on the back wall of the "split" fellow. But since, as you said, you will be placing a different background this detail is irrelevant.

Good job!
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