Model & Fashion Shot & Retouching Please C&C

[pod]

Hi Everybody ;

I learn so much things on this forum
I am working as a freelance retoucher but I just want to be photographer
after a few years dodge & burning clonening other photographers photos.

I decided make my photography portfolio..

Those are my first steps for this..

I really need your critiques comments..

I working hard and I will post a few more soon

Thx

Gokce

[dodezaine]

Opa (Hi), can help you in the following way, I saw that the photos have retouches, it are concluded. Perfect, for the that speaks you has experiences in that and exactly for that I, particularly, don't get to see problems, which I could help to solve in the hour of the reception of the image.

On the other hand, maybe there be not problem, for already to have retouched, seen and reviewed vary other photographers' pictures. Your sense criticizes should be high, what helps in the hour of the photo.

Of the pictures, the one that fewer liked it was the one of the woman for her to seem to float on the ground. To purpose, ground and bottom are confuse, it lacked 3D.

Thats all, hugs.
Fabio

[JD Spears]

Hi Pod,
Not versed in fashion, but looks fine to me. Except for being too small.

[ashphotoart]

Nice pictures.

Ash

[pod]

Thank you so much for your feedback Fabio
your words are really important for me I started with almost nothing just reading those forums

Thank You Ash I am glad to like it

JD Spears Thank you so much !

I am still trying I finished new composite shot and I!ll be send in a few minutes