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Blackeyed Susan and Green Lynx Spider.....

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Old 10-11-2008, 09:21 PM
YorkieMominFL YorkieMominFL is offline
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Blackeyed Susan and Green Lynx Spider.....

This is a photo that I took back in 2004 when I was first experimenting with my new Fuji S7000 and macro shots. In the second one I sharpened it a bit more. Does that look any better?

Thanks, Pam
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Old 10-12-2008, 06:17 AM
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Re: Blackeyed Susan and Green Lynx Spider.....

I like it.
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Old 10-14-2008, 02:46 PM
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Re: Blackeyed Susan and Green Lynx Spider.....

I'd only sharpen the flower itself, not the grass behind it. It just gives more noise there, doesn't really add something, IMHO.
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Old 10-28-2008, 09:23 PM
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Re: Blackeyed Susan and Green Lynx Spider.....

I agree; only sharpen the foreground elements. Also, the flower and the background almost blend into each other; I would probably darken the background just a LITTLE bit so that the flower and spider stand out a little more. I think this should be especially considered in the top left hand corner of the picture; the yellow of the flower matches the yellow in the grass. Great composition by the way!
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