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Old 10-28-2008, 06:54 PM
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disco queen

Hi everybody!
Another post from me. This time I played with colors. Don't know what else to say...so, please comment.
Thanks!
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Old 10-28-2008, 07:15 PM
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Re: disco queen

I'd like to see you play with eye shadow, liner and lip color.
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Old 10-28-2008, 09:18 PM
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Re: disco queen

Great work, I agree with Tommy; playing a little with lip and eye colours would help. I also think that you need to work on the outline of the hair a little. There seems to be a strange, dark outline along the top of the hair (near to the part) that outlines the top of hear head... I don't think this would happen naturally. If you adjust the colour of this outline to match the colour of the background (perhaps using the dodge and burn tools). Otherwise, looks great!
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Old 10-29-2008, 05:55 AM
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Re: disco queen

Agree with previous comments. And I would also like to se that background clean.
Good work!
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Old 10-29-2008, 10:37 AM
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Re: disco queen

Ok, I appreciate your inputs.
I didn't want her eye makeup to be clean, I like it sort of messy. I guess I could have taken it to another level, so that is what I will do. I don't see much color on her lips though.
About that hair outline, I must admit I missed that one. Thanks for pointing it out.
The background is pretty much the same messy thing I wanted to leave 'cause I tried to clean it up and it just didn't work for me. I will make it "messier" maybe it will work better... Thank you all. I'll be back as soon as I finish.
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Old 10-29-2008, 04:11 PM
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Re: disco queen

This is what came out of it. And a bit larger pic this time.
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Old 10-30-2008, 12:23 PM
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Re: disco queen

i like the right side one with better contrast.
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