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Old 11-07-2008, 02:03 PM
Kissa Kissa is offline
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Newbie - Hello and First photo

Hi i am a newbie here on the board recomended by another board member.

I am getting into photography lately and i LOVE doing the post processing the only thing is i don't know much about it yet and would really like to learn.

Here is one of the latest images i did.

thanks in advance for your CC

this is the original photo
http://images34.fotki.com/v1123/phot...IMG_425-vi.jpg
and these are some of the edits that i did.
some are more "dramatic" than the others.

http://images40.fotki.com/v1338/phot...G_0424a-vi.jpg
http://images41.fotki.com/v1344/phot...G_0424d-vi.jpg
http://images34.fotki.com/v1194/phot...G_0424c-vi.jpg
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Old 11-11-2008, 05:48 PM
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Re: Newbie - Hello and First photo

I probably like the last one the most. The first one, the light is too focused on just the center of the face that it ends up looking like a kabuki mask. On the last one, there are still some splotches of color on her face that make her end up looking blotchy. Also, the hair looks a bit too contrasted.
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Old 11-12-2008, 11:53 AM
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Re: Newbie - Hello and First photo

They look a bit flat to me.Try to add more shadows.Like in my example.
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