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Please critique my first serious retouch

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Old 11-20-2008, 07:17 AM
Moejoe Moejoe is offline
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Please critique my first serious retouch

Hi, here is a cropped version of a retouch I did. Tried to keep it realistic and just generally improve the image, without being overtly glamourous. In my defense I used a 13inch macbook with its trackpad so this probably effected some of my dnb and general brush work. Please give honest opinion, the harsh truth is more beneficial than sweet lie.

Original http://www.flickr.com/photos/3258836...86485/sizes/o/

Retouched http://www.flickr.com/photos/3258836...19846/sizes/o/
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Old 11-20-2008, 09:48 AM
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Re: Please critique my first serious retouch

I though the photo was took close so the lower face and the neck too big
My quick try by liquify filter bellow :
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Old 11-20-2008, 11:38 AM
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Re: Please critique my first serious retouch

Moejoe, welcome to RetouchPRO! Nice to have you aboard and hope you enjoy your time here. Try different things, learn, share, exchange ideas and opinions... Most of all feel at home.

Sometimes links to outside sites can get broken... It is much better to attach images on this site. That way the image that is posted will be viewable forever. After you post your less than 100K version here, you could also post a link to the site that is hosting a larger version (as you did)...

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It is a shame that you went to all that trouble to do such a nice Retouch and left her teeth yucky and discolored.

Looking foreword to seeing much more of your work! You are off to a nice beginning.
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Old 11-20-2008, 12:54 PM
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Re: Please critique my first serious retouch

OlBaldy; Hi, thanks for the warm welcome. Will defo do that next time. Im so used to seeing my yellow teeth every morning that hers looked good, lol.
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Old 11-21-2008, 11:45 AM
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Re: Please critique my first serious retouch

Hehe, I did whiten her teeth on my post but dare not to mention about it LOL
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