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11-22-2008, 11:28 PM
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| 1st attempt This is my 1st attempt at some sports photography for my sons school.They wanted an out of the ordinary pic, so please let me know what u think. Thanks (Poor gym lighting is rough)  |
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11-28-2008, 06:59 PM
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| Re: 1st attempt The shot is not bad... I would step back a bit on the stylized, highpass look a bit. That super sharpened, extreme shadow/highlight thing works sometimes for some types of shots but I feel it overwhelms the subject matter here. Just my $.02. |
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