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Old 01-06-2009, 11:55 AM
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Critique request 01

Hi there! How are you? I'm working on my portfolio and this are my last images I've done.
Comments are highly appreciated

Photographer: Henrik Bengtsson (Hubba)

01:
http://www.box.net/shared/k7ytzp5nms
http://www.box.net/shared/mmymnlcp63

02:
http://www.box.net/shared/qdxcm0t9bh
http://www.box.net/shared/06xug35ast

03:
http://www.box.net/shared/vtok90pcd2
http://www.box.net/shared/hljqejdb2r

Thank you in advance and nice evening!

Greetings from the snow- covered Milan

Sebastian
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File Type: jpg 3478_edit_02_flatten.jpg (36.4 KB, 48 views)
File Type: jpg 3472_flatten.jpg (32.3 KB, 45 views)

Last edited by sirespen; 01-07-2009 at 03:55 AM. Reason: Fixed links
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Old 01-06-2009, 01:23 PM
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Re: Critique request 01

Hun, get your links straight first!
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Old 01-06-2009, 02:35 PM
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Re: Critique request 01

Fixed! Thx!
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Old 01-06-2009, 09:14 PM
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Re: Critique request 01

I only looked at the first. Looks great. Did you duplicate one of the eyes and flip it to create perfect symmetry?
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Old 01-06-2009, 10:42 PM
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Re: Critique request 01

Although, I think I'm going against the grain, I think that "if you did duplicate and inverted the eye" , it changes the image to the point where the individual is no longer the recognizable subject. Few if any individuals have symmetry that would make them recognized as the original subject. In my opinion, it's the flaws of symmetry that makes beauty unique. Of course, to each their own.
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Old 01-07-2009, 04:03 AM
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Re: Critique request 01

Hello!
Yes, the first is totally faked. I think it's pretty obvious. It was more for fun, then for anything else. As LQQKER said, the subject is no longer recognizable

I had quite difficulties with the third image. How would you enhance the make-up tears?

I tried with black brush set to dissolve on a layer in hard light mode. Any other suggestions?

Ciaooo!
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Old 01-11-2009, 01:53 PM
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Re: Critique request 01

Plz. I need a few comments, otherwise I will never improve
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