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Some Wedding Shots Please Critique :)

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Old 02-04-2009, 07:23 PM
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Some Wedding Shots Please Critique :)

I would very much appreciate some critiques of the following photos in the following links. Thanks!!

http://www.flickr.com/photos/2850814...7613339144712/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/2850814...7613339144712/
http://www.flickr.com/photos/2850814...7613339144712/
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Old 02-04-2009, 08:44 PM
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Re: Some Wedding Shots Please Critique :)

Your composition is pretty good, but you really need to move them away from the complicated backgrounds. All the lines (from the bricks) criss-crossing their heads takes away from the couple. Get them into simple, un-complicated backgrounds and blur it out with f4.0 or larger aperture.
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Re: Some Wedding Shots Please Critique :)

I would recommend that you post these in the photography section of the forum.

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Old 02-12-2009, 10:16 AM
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Re: Some Wedding Shots Please Critique :)

Try a different cropping,because subject doesn't have to be in the center.
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