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Old 05-06-2009, 02:43 AM
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Re: please critique my work

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I am in agreement with Markzebra on the music; and the u tube Video quality does not do your work justice... I dropped by your deviantART page and took a look. You work is pretty good
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Old 05-06-2009, 03:53 AM
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Re: please critique my work

I took a quick look at your page and I think you're a great retoucher. Your selective sharpening is top notch. The only thing that jumped out at me was how many of your pictures have no eye-shadows, as in the shadows on the whites of the eyes.

If you're going to brighten the eye whites, make sure you either keep the shadows by not brightening that much, selectively brightening the non-shadowed only with curves, or put the shadows back later with burn. It's also not a bad idea to subtly enhance the shadows in the eye whites, especially after you've brightened dramatically. They enhance the realism and feeling of depth.
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Old 05-06-2009, 04:00 AM
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Re: please critique my work

I'm attaching a picture I did where I brightened her corneas, then added back in the shadow.

Keep retouching, I love your subtle style.
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