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here is my new work..pls some critique..

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Old 03-22-2009, 09:38 AM
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Re: here is my new work..pls some critique..

here is a little bit fixed version of portrait:
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/899/portret.jpg
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Old 03-22-2009, 10:46 AM
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Re: here is my new work..pls some critique..

i love the second pic. too..
great job..Hello..
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Old 03-30-2009, 09:03 AM
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Re: here is my new work..pls some critique..

thx!
last changes here: http://hellopiccadilly.deviantart.com/
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Old 03-30-2009, 04:51 PM
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Hi, hellopiccadilly,
the second image looks better since the tighter crop.

Did nobody spot the third arm holding the second bag in image three?

It's clever and for a second i thought i'd had too many vodka's lol, it gets lost a bit in the background and the shadow is not right, but may be that is deliberate and all part of the "victim of fashion" statement?

The pose in image 3 is excellent, she seems transfixed, addicted to shopping
Don't worry about the creases in the bags, it's what gives them contour and texture and looks fine slightly softened as you have done.

The arrow looks great and is an integral part of the message, it works really well on the panorama on your site, how did you create the arrow, is it just burning?
In image 2 i like the match between the poster on the wall behind and the pose of the model, brilliant
The doorway is perfect in the pano and just the right hight for her left hand in the pose.
I like the way the posters on the wall are slightly darker at the bottom, getting lighter at the top, the arrow is taking the eye to the right and also the wall is taking the eye upwards.
There is just a slight part of her face above the neck that is blown out in the panorama, overall, excellent and very creative,
regards,
Gary
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