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Old 05-04-2009, 11:44 AM
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Hello,
I am a 1st time user looking for creative critique of this promotional poster.
TIA for your thoughts. anything i can do to improve?
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Old 05-04-2009, 05:45 PM
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Re: News poster

I would change the font for the black #69s.. or use the gold/blue layer... the black #s look like 89 to me..

what 3d app did you use?
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Old 05-04-2009, 08:24 PM
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Re: News poster

I like it, it's pretty dynamic.
One thing I would maybe re-think is the top right word sequence "On the Scene with 69 news" and "live breaking news". I have a tendency to read it as follow: "On the scene Live breaking with 69 news News". It might not happen to everyone but when I read it I had to take a second place it back in the right order hehe.

Another thing is a matter of opinion but what if you didn't make the WFMZ.com on the middle left stick to the border since nothing else sticks to it? Just a thought.

Cool stuff.
69 news eh? hehe
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Old 05-05-2009, 08:06 AM
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I would change the font for the black #69s.. or use the gold/blue layer... the black #s look like 89 to me..

what 3d app did you use?
I used Cinema4d for the 3d
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Old 05-07-2009, 05:38 AM
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I read it as "LIVE BREAKING NEWS coverage. On the scene BRE with 69 ((89?)) news"

And then, "69 News: We've got you covered!" Did you come up with that, or is that actually the stations slogan? Just curious.
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Old 05-07-2009, 08:00 AM
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I like it, it's pretty dynamic.
One thing I would maybe re-think is the top right word sequence "On the Scene with 69 news" and "live breaking news". I have a tendency to read it as follow: "On the scene Live breaking with 69 news News". It might not happen to everyone but when I read it I had to take a second place it back in the right order hehe.

Another thing is a matter of opinion but what if you didn't make the WFMZ.com on the middle left stick to the border since nothing else sticks to it? Just a thought.

Cool stuff.
69 news eh? hehe
Good idea..........here is an update............
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