News poster

[3DDAVE]

Hello,
I am a 1st time user looking for creative critique of this promotional poster.
TIA for your thoughts. anything i can do to improve?

[0lBaldy]

I would change the font for the black #69s.. or use the gold/blue layer... the black #s look like 89 to me..

what 3d app did you use?

[Droolio]

I like it, it's pretty dynamic.
One thing I would maybe re-think is the top right word sequence "On the Scene with 69 news" and "live breaking news". I have a tendency to read it as follow: "On the scene Live breaking with 69 news News". It might not happen to everyone but when I read it I had to take a second place it back in the right order hehe.

Another thing is a matter of opinion but what if you didn't make the WFMZ.com on the middle left stick to the border since nothing else sticks to it? Just a thought.

Cool stuff.
69 news eh? hehe

[3DDAVE]

Originally Posted by 0lBaldy

I would change the font for the black #69s.. or use the gold/blue layer... the black #s look like 89 to me..

what 3d app did you use?

I used Cinema4d for the 3d

[mikedimples]

I read it as "LIVE BREAKING NEWS coverage. On the scene BRE with 69 ((89?)) news"

And then, "69 News: We've got you covered!" Did you come up with that, or is that actually the stations slogan? Just curious.

[3DDAVE]

Originally Posted by Droolio

I like it, it's pretty dynamic.
One thing I would maybe re-think is the top right word sequence "On the Scene with 69 news" and "live breaking news". I have a tendency to read it as follow: "On the scene Live breaking with 69 news News". It might not happen to everyone but when I read it I had to take a second place it back in the right order hehe.

Another thing is a matter of opinion but what if you didn't make the WFMZ.com on the middle left stick to the border since nothing else sticks to it? Just a thought.

Cool stuff.
69 news eh? hehe

Good idea..........here is an update............