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Old 05-09-2009, 06:22 AM
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hello please give some feeback cheers

hi this is one of my first restorations in photoshop have done lots of other web stuff am gonna get better at restoration and imaging please ctitique cheers i did do this from a tutorial but all my own work
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Old 05-09-2009, 06:23 AM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

if anyone can give me a good restoration tutorial site or lkist of techniques that would be cool
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Old 05-09-2009, 07:37 AM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

Here a good tut.. http://www.lazymask.com/photo-restoration-tutorial.html
But i'm not so sure you need it, You're work looks very realistic. I think most tutorials let you use clone stamp or healing tool, some maybe patch but it's more precise to use Clone or healing.
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Old 05-09-2009, 09:31 AM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

cheers buddy i've been taghut that an easy and good way is to copy an area with the marquee tool then copy that area because it covers larger areas than the clone tool alone
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Old 05-09-2009, 10:50 AM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

Overall a good beginning. You might want to adjust the left eye that you copied from the right one. Right now he's a little cross-eyed. The eyes also look too close together but that may be illusion.
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Old 05-14-2009, 05:33 AM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

i'd have to re build the entire face to have it proportional and a syntrical face would be unrealistic its an imperfaction that makes it look more realistic if you catch my drift
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Old 05-14-2009, 09:22 AM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

Happymind, welcome to RetouchPRO Hope you enjoy your stay here and make lots of friends.

Under the 'Site Nav' button above.... there is a menu item called 'Tutorials'... you might find some interesting stuff there..

There is some good stuff at 'Photoworkshop'

Russell Brown also has some fantastic tutorials

I think what Lurch meant was ... when you moved the copied eye... it was not lined up properly with the eye you were replacing.. thereby making it look a little off and making the man look a bit cross-eyed..

When asking for a critique be prepared to get a critique... we are trying to help you improve your work..

There is still a lot of work to be done on this picture... the white spot you moved from the left side is still on the right side even though you got rid of it on the left.. the mans forehead is still very blotchy with glaring white areas showing where you have missed repairing..

all in all as stated above it is a very good beginning because there is a lot more that could be done to this picture to make it more acceptable.. more attention to details and a bit more patience will certainly improve your future projects..

Keep up the good work and 'Practice Cubed!'

Would like to see you final rendition of this picture and am looking forward to seeing more of your work

I hope you don't mind if I played with your picture, Here is a quick play with the eye in the proper place.. it seemed the best way to illustrate what I meant with the critique
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Old 05-14-2009, 12:17 PM
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Re: hello please give some feeback cheers

cheers for the advice you version is good i noticed the contrast is alot better than the other image also the eye works ill do some other restorations and redo this one i am just a humble begginner and am glad to recieve such constructive critique advice ill be sure to check out the tutorial
what is 'Practice Cubed?
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Old 05-14-2009, 12:39 PM
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what is 'Practice Cubed?
Practice, practice, practice
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Old 05-14-2009, 03:17 PM
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i see thats cool i agree practice makes better
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