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Old 06-28-2009, 02:45 PM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Looking better imo.
First one may be a bit too dark though.

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Old 06-28-2009, 02:49 PM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Btw where's my critique?!_lol
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Old 06-30-2009, 03:31 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

I will do a critic, do you have a website?
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Old 06-30-2009, 04:59 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Hi, there is another job I just done, the basic picture was in very low quality...
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Old 06-30-2009, 11:39 AM
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http://www.retouchpro.com/forums/pho...uch-photo.html
Thanks rsphotocreation, there's the link.
No I don't have a website yet, working on my portfolio still. Anyways I posted this link to this one picture I did, tell me what you think of it.
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Old 07-01-2009, 04:39 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Here is another photo retouched, let me know what you think about that :p
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Old 07-01-2009, 05:06 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Here is another makeover, the basic pic was in low quality so i did what i could
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Old 07-01-2009, 04:39 PM
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This is one of my best photo enhancement tell me what do you thing is wrong with it

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Old 07-01-2009, 05:42 PM
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Re: Could you critic that!

they look more creative than nicely retouch imo. also, u work from mostly poor quality and low res images. it would looks more professional to have a pro quality image to start off wit. blond girl w/ gun & pink purse, colors a bit too saturated, but I like hair & skin color.
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Old 07-01-2009, 05:54 PM
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Thank you for the advices, I work with people on Facebook, the send me a lot of pics from their phone, so it's in poor quality i know it
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Old 07-08-2009, 03:14 PM
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This another photo I've made, tell me what you think, i've tried to make it like the cover of the CSI dvd's
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Old 07-09-2009, 02:25 PM
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Another edition here
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Old 07-14-2009, 05:34 AM
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This is another photo enhancement here, tell me what you think :)
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Old 07-14-2009, 06:06 AM
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Not bad but overdoing the eyes in my opinion..

I also think your not helping yourself by starting with low quality images. You're never going to turn a poor shot into a good one!

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Old 07-28-2009, 10:24 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Hi, this is another retouching
I was wondering, does someone know where i could go on the web, in order to find an online job, I know the website "Elance" I wanted to find other ones. thanks in advance
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Old 07-28-2009, 09:34 PM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Go to www.workathometruth.com/. This guy has exposed tons of work-at-home scams and filtered out the legitimate ones. There is a very small subscription to get his frequent e-mails referring to new ones from every conceivable offering. It is the best "worth a look" of which I am familiar. Checking it out will be very worthwhile.

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Old 07-28-2009, 11:58 PM
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Thanks a lot it's really appreaciated
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Old 07-29-2009, 12:57 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

check out http://beta.phokki.com/
it is a legit site. there's a section for photo manipulation and retouch that might interest you. photo manipulation is probably suite your photo retouch style imo. if you don't have a high res image to show your work/style, they provide sample photos you can download (that dude w/ the fro everywhere).
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Old 07-29-2009, 01:21 AM
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Thanks a lot d00dle, I will check this out. It seems to be the best thing I've seen so far :p

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Old 07-29-2009, 01:54 AM
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my bad, I hope it is legit. i dont know if phokki actually have customers, but give it a try i guess. lets us know if it works.

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Old 07-29-2009, 03:22 PM
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Re: Could you critic that!

I've created my own profile here: http://beta.phokki.com/artist/profile/rsphotocreation

tell me what you think about it, do the prices are good? cause among this website, people don't hesitate to ask $150 for a pic to be enhanced.
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Old 11-03-2009, 05:23 AM
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Hey, this is my new photo retouching, after a few months of rest ahah, tell me what you think about that please, critic the thing!!!

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Old 11-03-2009, 07:34 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

Guys, do you do this for money too?
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quantum3... wooooow for the website
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Old 11-06-2009, 04:10 AM
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Hi, someone asked me to edit these 2 photos, I tried to keep the same mood between those photos, could you critic my job please

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Old 11-07-2009, 06:35 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

What are you going for with your chops? Are you going for realistic? If you are you really need to step back and look at your work.
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Old 11-07-2009, 06:50 AM
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Re: Could you critic that!

I edited those pics with some extrem glamour retouching, i didn't want to be soft
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Old 11-07-2009, 06:55 AM
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I do the white as a signature :p and I change of style once in a while, at that moment I love the picture with smooth faces and stuffs like that.

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You should ask your self about style. It's not just chaning the look of the picture. The style should improve, enhance and make the picture more attractive in a very particular way. You may be very happy with what you do to your pictures, the same happened to me when I was a benginner and that's good because it helps you to keep going more and more in detail and some day you will notice that these editings are not as good as you think right now. That's the good thing of askin for critiques, because people is not emotionally involved with the pictures, and they can write up things a bit more objectively, however, most people thoughts are subjective meaning that people who say "I don't like it" may be they're talking from their subjectiveness.

Try to see others people work and compare it to yours and you will tell the difference. You can start here: www.shiftstudio.ca see the fashion category.

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Old 11-17-2009, 02:09 AM
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This my first slight retouch, this photo is a friend of mine who wanted me to edit his pic for his facebook's profile. Critic please, I'm trying to change my style to something more natural.

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Old 11-17-2009, 07:31 AM
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This my first slight retouch, this photo is a friend of mine who wanted me to edit his pic for his facebook's profile. Critic please, I'm trying to change my style to something more natural.

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Still doesn't look natural. Picture is not color corrected amd it looks too smooth.
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