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Old 11-19-2009, 02:30 PM
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Re: Could you critic that!

removing the shadow in the background would make the image look more balanced.
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Old 02-03-2010, 09:28 AM
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here is another retouch I made, tell me what you think guys, I also want you to tell me what you think about my flash introduction on my website:

http://rsphotocreation.weebly.com/

it's not finished yet but i wanna know what you think about it, thanks


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Old 02-03-2010, 09:34 AM
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You need to balance your highlights and stop using glow effects. Cheeckbones are too dark.
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Old 02-05-2010, 06:07 PM
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Looks like you have gotten better since your stuff back on the first page. The biggest thing I could offer as a suggestion to you at this point is.....


...BURN YOUR WEBSITE TO THE GROUND! =) Seriously though, that made me want to douse myself in kerosene and light a match. Between the loud music and machine gun quick graphic strobing I thought I was going to go into an epileptic seizure.

Ok, so I am kinda joking around here, but you really should tone that down a bit.
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Old 02-05-2010, 06:19 PM
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...BURN YOUR WEBSITE TO THE GROUND! =)
man, don't you think you were a bit rude here? You don't know how much effort this guy put on his website, and he likes this way. You should respect a bit the taste of others and suggest what should be tuned. However, I comprehend your reaction now I see the website. It makes everybody run away from there, seriously.
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Old 02-05-2010, 06:24 PM
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rsphotocreation, dude, do yourself a favor.... get yourself a real photograph like this one and start learning from scratch.
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Old 02-05-2010, 06:51 PM
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rsphotocreation, dude, do yourself a favor.... get yourself a real photograph like this one and start learning from scratch.
Hoho... Man... You're pushing me to publish something I did for the sake of the challenge... Just few secs...

http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r...Untitled-1.jpg

That was hard... XD
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Old 02-05-2010, 06:59 PM
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That, my friend, is a skin transplant. I have taken the time to analyze it properly, must have taken ages. Good job.
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Old 02-08-2010, 05:12 AM
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Here; another retouch
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Old 02-08-2010, 07:01 AM
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That, my friend, is a skin transplant. I have taken the time to analyze it properly, must have taken ages. Good job.
Around 9 hours... I would like to do it better, but I'm not satisfied with the result, so I trashed it.
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