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Old 06-28-2009, 09:35 AM
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Fashion retouch

Looking for some feedback and critic. Thoe it might be hard to see everything since i have compressed the image so it was possible to upload it. The skin is fixed with D&B.
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Old 06-30-2009, 03:52 AM
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Re: Fashion retouch

Wow, very nice work. I love how you added to blue eyeshadow/feather highlights as a spot contrast in an otherwise warm image. Great job on the blush color, very lovely. From what I can see from the small image, perfect dodge and burn retouch.

I would have cleaned up the straggly hairs by her neck, removed the hair tendral from her forehead and made some of the contours of her body a little more smooth. I'll attach a picture to show what I mean. It may not be anatomically correct, but I think it makes the image more pleasing.
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Old 06-30-2009, 12:25 PM
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Re: Fashion retouch

Good job, looks good, 1 thing i would change is the slightly harsh blue makeup. have it blend a little more so the transition is not so strong. but real good.
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Old 06-30-2009, 12:58 PM
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Re: Fashion retouch

Thanks you very much for all tips, I will work on them to improve the picture.
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