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Old 05-31-2002, 07:40 PM
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hi mates! this is my new work named "Fashion" a try for a commercial advertisement of cosmetics products. All critics accepted!

Thanks in advance


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Old 05-31-2002, 07:41 PM
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Old 05-31-2002, 09:38 PM
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Very well done! I like it.
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Old 06-01-2002, 09:01 AM
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Looks like a professional job to me. Good work. I think the design turned out great. Love the softened look of the title. You should post this in the main Gallery. It's really very good.
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Old 06-01-2002, 09:16 AM
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sorry but, where is the main gallery?
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Old 06-01-2002, 12:36 PM
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ApWiz...

Kudos from me, too. Just awesome.

RE: Gallery
Point at the "menu" hot spot (top left), scroll down to Gallery and you're there.

You can upload pics the same way as with thread posts.

Keep up the gr-eat work. Look forward to seeing some of your other pics in The Gallery!

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Old 06-01-2002, 12:50 PM
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ok i made it!
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Old 06-01-2002, 06:23 PM
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Overall, I like it, but if I were doing it, I would make the model more visible, and tone down the brushes a little.

BTW, the large brush looks like it would be good for dusting off Vinyl records, or CDs or puter guts.........
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Old 12-10-2004, 06:04 AM
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Very nice!
I would also make the moddel more visible and maybe use a photo where the makeup things wasent lined up stright.

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