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Old 07-28-2009, 11:48 AM
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Re: Natural

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The only thing I see after a quick, cursory inspection is...Her lips are sewn together in the corner by a hair
true... need to fix that - and the too symmetrical lip joins (that was a note to self )

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Hmm... i dont know why, but it looks little blurred for me (also oryginal) andlack of contrast, but its only personal feeling.
It is andI like the soft, angel feel to it - she is only 16! What a model!

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left eye (from watcher point of view) - little change of shape, and new one looks less natural than oryginal.
I think the original looked a bit crooked


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You just need to very slightly colorize where you have dodged under her eyes.
True... it's a bit gray - I don't know if I dislike that tho...

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I think it might not be a good idea to make her features completely symetrical? Don't know, slight uneveness goes with the feel of it - you could try it and decide. End of her chin, yes maybe that could be sorted
I think I also like the features not being completelly symetrical in THIS particular image... she is like leaning to kiss u and I don't want to lose that

The chin... maybe a bit, but just a bit

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I marked them in the screenshot....
I like the wide nose - I agree with the eyelashes totally... I'm going to re draw them.


Thanks EVERYONE for the input, means a lot

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Old 07-28-2009, 04:11 PM
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Re: Natural

Good work for sure,
I would remove the dark lines on the neck.
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Old 07-28-2009, 09:34 PM
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Re: Natural

what do you think of taking out extra creases on the eyelids? personally, i think her eyebrows are far apart. it's ok to criss cross eyelashes when you paint them. i'd like to see eyeliners lighten and soften to match the feel of the rest of the photo. i think there is too much emphasis on the area between the nose and upper lip--i like the original part better.

i like the color over all. i like new hair but need some lens blur in some areas
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