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Old 08-06-2009, 08:12 AM
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Midsummers Eve Trio

I would like your honest opinion on what I have done here, which is a lot might I add, Is it too much, not enough. Details Please
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Old 08-06-2009, 11:46 AM
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Re: Midsummers Eve Trio

Kewl composition and interesting concept!

IMO to much flair for me.. the bright area in the upper left draws the eye and distracts from the composition.. but it seems you like it... which makes it OK, if it is going to be your style

Watch for color casts though...
the seated person has a greenish cast on his head,
standing left person has a magenta cast on his head,
on the right... yellowish cast on his head.

Looks like you are getting much more comfortable and adventurous with your photography... your skills have progressed nicely.. keep up the good work!
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Old 08-06-2009, 01:09 PM
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Re: Midsummers Eve Trio

Thanks alot 0lBaldy, I was competely in the moment when I created this, but I will keep the details you mentioned, in mind for the future images I make.
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Old 08-06-2009, 03:14 PM
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Re: Midsummers Eve Trio

I like it, but have to agree with OlBaldy on the distraction in the upper left.
Maybe tone it down a couple degrees.
I especially like the wood floor and pants textures.
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