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Old 09-14-2009, 12:28 PM
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I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

that doesn't matter how it was before.
I need ur opinion about final result.

http://hellopiccadilly.deviantart.co...hair-136994082
http://hellopiccadilly.deviantart.co...eous-137014927
http://hellopiccadilly.deviantart.co...pade-137108620

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Old 09-15-2009, 09:19 AM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

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that doesn't matter how it was before.
Yes, it probably does - how will we see what you have achieved ?
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Old 09-15-2009, 10:15 AM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

Umm, not sure what to make of it.
I guess, the purpose of the retouch shots would help.
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Old 09-15-2009, 03:15 PM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

okey
here is b4 and after

http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/4226/55254907.jpg
http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/6378/25587078.jpg

The point of this retouching was to make nice spectacular portraits in unusual way and it also should be nice and attractive.
Photos are also were made by me.

if u tell me how to make flash file with mouseover effect, it would be awesome )

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Old 09-15-2009, 06:50 PM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

Portrait is definitely unusual but I do not personally find it attractive.
I'm sure there are others in the community who can chime in with
more positive constructive comments that I may not readily see.

A+ for effort though.
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Old 09-15-2009, 07:12 PM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

Quite heavy handed, and you might want to look at the necks as well, instead of just the face. Smooth face, wrinkly neck. Not the best look.
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Old 09-15-2009, 09:08 PM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

Mmmhhh... they're good but somehow, cold. I think they need more passion.
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Old 09-16-2009, 02:25 AM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

okey, Im just learning )
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Old 09-17-2009, 05:29 PM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

Only thing I can comment on is that I think you did too much of a tan =\ The second girl's neck and collar bone look like that of a mummy rather than a person.
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Old 09-17-2009, 11:04 PM
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Re: I need ur opinion for that kind of retouching

Well add some exposure and clean some black spots.
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