firstdate!

[Gee]

hello, this is my latest personal series... all critiques will be much appreciated...

1 / http://www.flickr.com/photos/gkayacan/4070742410/
2 / http://www.flickr.com/photos/gkayacan/4066314680/
3 / http://www.flickr.com/photos/gkayacan/4076950048/

[AngeloLorenzo]

The idea is there, but it feels too stiff, flat, and preplanned. Let the models work their chemistry and get a little more inventive with composition.

The styling looks great though.

[slash-5]

I think he is actually stronger than she is. She looks like someone who is trying to look like someone who doesn't want to be there.