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Old 11-04-2009, 09:52 PM
Gee Gee is offline
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firstdate!

hello, this is my latest personal series... all critiques will be much appreciated...

1 / http://www.flickr.com/photos/gkayacan/4070742410/
2 / http://www.flickr.com/photos/gkayacan/4066314680/
3 / http://www.flickr.com/photos/gkayacan/4076950048/
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Old 11-18-2009, 01:42 AM
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The idea is there, but it feels too stiff, flat, and preplanned. Let the models work their chemistry and get a little more inventive with composition.

The styling looks great though.
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Old 12-19-2009, 09:16 AM
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Re: firstdate!

I think he is actually stronger than she is. She looks like someone who is trying to look like someone who doesn't want to be there.
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