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Old 12-14-2009, 04:23 PM
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Lightbulb Portfolio update


I would like to know your thought about my recent works. Here are the link:

Looking forward to hearing from you

Yahor Shumski
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Old 12-18-2009, 12:57 PM
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Re: Portfolio update

hi. nice stuff on the site.

for the family pic, I think your alts are great.

The only comment I have is that the plant is very brightly lit, but nothing else in the room is being hit by the same light. Also the dad's remote-holding hand looks strange now that there's no remote in it.

For the sexy lumberjack girl, I think the background needs to be richer. It's a little too white-washed at the moment.

Looking at some of your other images, like the curly haired guy sitting in front of the wall, I think you should have a look at shadows and how our bodies make shadows on backgrounds. I need to do this we well.

you have some great stuff.
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