Originally Posted by 0lBaldy
Had to make a comment here... I liked the concept but I think it might have been over-worked a bit.... except for the hair she looked bland and washed out to me...
Tried to stay with the original Kewl concept...
Blended the Original with your retouch to bring out some details
added lower eyelashes
wow! love what u did on the hair...
and finally the gold leaf doesn't feel like floating so 2 out 3! ... cause am keeping the soft pink on the lips..
anyways your approach on the image is kind of stronger.. so I guess it works for your version...
thanks for giving it a try!