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Old 03-25-2010, 06:01 AM
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First Critique, Suicidal Shoot

I just recently began to learn photoshop and this was my first real shoot requiring heavy photoshop so I thought I'd join a site more dedicated to editing then normal photography sites. I hope to learn alot from here. Just to let everyone know I am planning to reshoot the hanging shot to have the sun coming threw the walls more and she will be wearing a more flowing dress and longer haired wig, it was more of a test to see if I was capable of doing it.

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Old 04-02-2010, 01:24 AM
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Re: First Critque, Suicidal Shoot

Hey kc502 greetings, I look at this work and to me it's a really well done job, but I look at the first frame and to me it has one flaw, the girl hanging has no shadow on the floor, it may be a little issue and if you say that you are still working on it then you can do something about it :P overall I love the second frame I would love to approach something like that myself.

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Old 04-02-2010, 01:47 AM
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lol thanks for the reply, I didn't even notice she should have a shadow, I'll deff keep it mind for the future and prob go back and fix it in this one.
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