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Old 04-01-2010, 10:49 AM
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Hey guys, little feedback of this work? :)

Hey there guys!

I'm Renato, Im an amateur photographer and of course retoucher as well tryin' to improve my skills :P. You know, like many other photographers out there I just didn't feel brave enough to post something in here, I've been reading this forums for quite a while and I think it's the perfect time to ask for opinions of this simple work.

I spent a lot of time doing the post processing and I had so much fun doing the shoot but as you can see I'm no expert, it is basically -a composite- image (I think those are called that way) of the model and some "flying objects" which I did shot later.

I work under a lot of curve, levels and selective correction layers, dodge burning and skin smooth and color treatment.

The question would be; what do you think this image It is too much... like?
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Old 04-01-2010, 12:46 PM
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Hi Motionless- it looks very good in my opinion.
Nice job masking the hair.
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Old 04-01-2010, 01:08 PM
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Re: Hey guys, litlle feedback of this work? :)

Motionless - if you were aiming for a greeting-card style, you nailed it. I agree with mushmush about the hair, though at the image's resolution it's hard to tell for sure.
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Old 04-01-2010, 09:56 PM
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Re: Hey guys, litlle feedback of this work? :)

Looks really clean. May be too clean around the hair though, although agreeing with lurch; hard to tell with that res. Catching a few more those "flyhairs" can give it a more natural feel. Great job though- I like it.

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Old 04-02-2010, 01:16 AM
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Re: Hey guys, little feedback of this work? :)

Hey there! I wanna thank you all for your kind comments and well just so everybody can see it, I think it was a little hard work on the hair, I could not clean out all the hair, there you can see a higher res of this pic.

http://www.simple-motions.net/backy2.jpg

Greetings!

Renato
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Old 04-02-2010, 08:59 AM
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Re: Hey guys, little feedback of this work? :)

I like the lighting on the model, but only thing that really bothers me is the hand sticking out of her head.. Sorry, I know that its her other hand.. but still..
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