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Old 06-21-2010, 01:39 AM
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Old 06-21-2010, 09:59 PM
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nice work!
I gave her a slight tan and a little botox in the lips
and removed the little "dimpled chin"
but I tend to overdo things. I would be thrilled if it was my picture!!
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Old 06-21-2010, 11:42 PM
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Welcome back to RetouchPRO filthy

Nice post... I like what you have done thus far on this image... maybe bring back a tiny bit of the contours under the eyes.... Hope to see more of your work!

Unless you really desire the sort of vignette effect I would open the chest and hair some and get rid of the shoulder point and bra pieces

(give the gif a couple seconds to change)
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Old 06-25-2010, 02:17 AM
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http://s002.radikal.ru/i197/1006/4c/a191f7c065aa.jpg [before]

http://i052.radikal.ru/1006/bc/02a860e959f1.jpg [before_1]

http://s56.radikal.ru/i152/1006/3b/7ffc340e7c06.jpg [after]
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Old 06-26-2010, 02:56 PM
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hi-res before

hi-res after

all before

all after

my try in B/W, on soft-box 60x60.
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Old 06-28-2010, 01:11 AM
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The last picture with this girl:

before

after

Thx )
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Old 06-28-2010, 05:11 PM
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Great stuff. Maybe do something with the hair in the BW one.
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Old 06-29-2010, 01:40 AM
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Thx. There is no information in the dark, i think make one more photo with another light )
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Old 06-29-2010, 09:20 AM
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Welcome back to RetouchPRO filthy

Nice post... I like what you have done thus far on this image... maybe bring back a tiny bit of the contours under the eyes.... Hope to see more of your work!

Unless you really desire the sort of vignette effect I would open the chest and hair some and get rid of the shoulder point and bra pieces

(give the gif a couple seconds to change)
OlBaldy...

I like the way you used a gif to demonstrate the "before" and "after".
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Old 06-30-2010, 05:00 AM
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First no beauty pic )

http://s13.radikal.ru/i186/1006/bd/bf779cc9d7c2.jpg - before

http://s13.radikal.ru/i186/1006/5c/b33e5a75d581.jpg - after, but not finished
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Old 07-11-2010, 02:59 PM
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My new pic:

http://s39.radikal.ru/i084/1007/3f/2d68fe836472.jpg - before

http://s50.radikal.ru/i127/1007/6e/a7ba7d130f38.jpg - after

What about color? More warm? And what about skin texture?
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Old 07-11-2010, 04:09 PM
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Hi

eyes need looking at, looks like they have not been touched.
looking good though.
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