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Old 08-17-2010, 07:24 PM
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New in Retouching Need from advice

Hi there, I want to know what you think about my work. I'll be happy for any advice.

Original image http://www.flickr.com/photos/azcumbria/4903079924/

post http://www.flickr.com/photos/azcumbria/4897770141/

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Old 08-18-2010, 02:48 AM
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Re: New in Retouching Need from advice

Hi Andy,

welcome to RetouchPRO!!!

I love the 'cropping' and the B&W idea .... but, personally, I found the whole composition a bit too dark ... the little girl didn't really 'jump' to my eyes ... she seems a bit lost against the overwhelming wall background.

Parts of the shadows seem to be solid black blocks.

I'm more into restorations rather than retouching, so take my critique with a pinch of salt ...

I'm moving your Thread to the Critiques Forum.
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Old 08-18-2010, 04:06 AM
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Thanks Flora!
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Old 08-19-2010, 04:07 AM
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You are very welcome!!!
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