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Old 09-09-2010, 04:47 PM
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good or bad?

what do you think about this?
http://atarixdesigns.deviantart.com/...ouch-178239003

what should go beter?
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Old 09-12-2010, 08:03 PM
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Re: good or bad?

atarix, welcome to RetouchPro. The after is better than the before however it could still use some work. The color may be off because it's being viewed by a browser and you may have an embedded profile that is different from sRGB but the skin is a bit too red/magenta. I'd fix up the boney knuckles a little.The main body of hair over her breasts (not in the V neck) have a lot of messy hair that would look better if tidied up a bit. The skin looks ok but it is hard to tell without a close up look and since you have embedded the image in flash I am assuming you do not want it downloaded.
Regards, Murray
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Old 09-20-2010, 09:49 AM
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Re: good or bad?

I think it looks great. It's always difficult to shoot a high contrast image- and her skin tones were overexposed- I like how you added depth and warmed it up overall.
I also like the highlights on her hair. What appeals to me the most is that your finished image does "look" retouched to me.
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