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Old 09-29-2010, 03:54 AM
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Hello All,


Would love some critiques on this painting please be as bad as you want I have lots to learn.

I yet to create the background which I am working on.


Many thanks in advance.




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Old 09-29-2010, 04:14 AM
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This is lovely, Marie (?), only distracting thing are the yellow blotches on the skin (forehead, hands)
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Old 09-29-2010, 09:46 AM
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I agree, apart form the yellow blotches, it is lovely. An adorable little model too. I like your painting technique...not too heavy handed.
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Old 09-29-2010, 11:25 AM
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This is lovely, Marie (?), only distracting thing are the yellow blotches on the skin (forehead, hands)
Thank you for your time and critique it is much aprpeciated. I agree after having a break from the photo I can see the yellow blotch stands out I shall smooth and blend it out a little.

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Thank you for your time and critique it is much aprpeciated. I agree after having a break from the photo I can see the yellow blotch stands out I shall smooth and blend it out a little.

helen
Sorry, Helen, don't know why Marie came into my mind :-) Must have mistaken you with someone from another forum, sorry again
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I agree, apart form the yellow blotches, it is lovely. An adorable little model too. I like your painting technique...not too heavy handed.

Thank you Carol for your time and critique it is much appreciated. Agree about the yellow colours I shall tone it down a little I am new to corel painter and this style of painting but with critiques I shall learn more.
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Old 09-29-2010, 11:29 AM
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Sorry, Helen, don't know why Marie came into my mind :-) Must have mistaken you with someone from another forum, sorry again

No problems sorry for confusing you. Marie is my name also some forums I use helen and some Marie.
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