Critiques please

[sergio2263]

Hello All,


Would love some critiques on this painting please be as bad as you want I have lots to learn.

I yet to create the background which I am working on.


Many thanks in advance.




http://www.pbase.com/mstmart/image/128930819/original

[amica999]

This is lovely, Marie (?), only distracting thing are the yellow blotches on the skin (forehead, hands)

[Carol Heath]

I agree, apart form the yellow blotches, it is lovely. An adorable little model too. I like your painting technique...not too heavy handed.

[sergio2263]

Originally Posted by amica999

This is lovely, Marie (?), only distracting thing are the yellow blotches on the skin (forehead, hands)

Thank you for your time and critique it is much aprpeciated. I agree after having a break from the photo I can see the yellow blotch stands out I shall smooth and blend it out a little.

helen

[amica999]

Originally Posted by sergio2263

Thank you for your time and critique it is much aprpeciated. I agree after having a break from the photo I can see the yellow blotch stands out I shall smooth and blend it out a little.

helen

Sorry, Helen, don't know why Marie came into my mind :-) Must have mistaken you with someone from another forum, sorry again

[sergio2263]

Originally Posted by Carol Heath

I agree, apart form the yellow blotches, it is lovely. An adorable little model too. I like your painting technique...not too heavy handed.

Thank you Carol for your time and critique it is much appreciated. Agree about the yellow colours I shall tone it down a little I am new to corel painter and this style of painting but with critiques I shall learn more.

[sergio2263]

Originally Posted by amica999

Sorry, Helen, don't know why Marie came into my mind :-) Must have mistaken you with someone from another forum, sorry again

No problems sorry for confusing you. Marie is my name also some forums I use helen and some Marie.