Some Tips and Critiques Please

[frakkie]

Hello All

After a while i finally found the courage to post my first post here on RetouchPro

I've done some retouching on this image, but i wonder, what can i improve, what should i've done another way?

First i did some healing with the frequency technique, next i did some color adjustments, and and finally some boy changes, Also in between some fly away hairs!

Large version can be found here:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/frakkie...n/photostream/

[Marlin523]

Really cool and different

[NotWhatUThink]

Good work! Cool Image

couple things I would do are.
I would probably dodge/burn around her chin as it is a little blotchy.
The right side of the forehead there is pink skin showing, i'd extend the make up right to the hairline.
Clean up the arm pit a little more, even out the tone a bit.
Her face seems a bit long and 2 narrow the where her cheek bones should be, maybe just play a little with the shape just looks a tiny bit off.
Also with the hair I would try duplicate the right sight of the bulb to the left, The left side is a little distracting.

Hope this helps.