Critique My New Port!

[VOYAGE_RETOUCH]

Only a few up now, but planning to add more everyday. Let me know what you guys think! I tend to approach retouching with a spontaneous attitude, adding six pack abs, muscle mass, digital makeup contouring, etc.

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Thanks guys! Looking to network and work my way to the top agencies, but I want some good critiques from you guys before anything

-CORY (VOYAGE RETOUCH)

[Repairman]

Hi Cory - there is a big difference between adding effects to a picture in a spontaneous way and responding to a client brief which tends to be less forgiving. You did a good job bulking up the guy's muscles but spoiled it by painting abs in a random fashion. I'd redo those paying more attention to real anatomy. Again, generally a nice job on the girls face but her new cheeks are harshly defined and could gradate more smoothly. The top right arm could be shaped to better effect. And put the chair shadow back! On the final pic - I would prefer the hand in shot to connect her to the wall. Well, you did ask! Good retouching is in the details that often go unnoticed but they make THE difference. I learned more over the years by criticism than praise so don't be discouraged - it's all meant well. You are well on your way so good luck in your endeavours.
R.