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New picture - Critique please!

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Old 02-05-2011, 06:11 AM
Marketa Marketa is offline
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New picture - Critique please!

Hi,

I've just retouched this picture:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21408737

Can you have a look at it and say what you think about it?

Thanks!

Marketa
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Old 02-23-2011, 09:33 AM
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Re: New picture - Critique please!

Looks great, other then the blemish on her cheek i would smooth out the chicken skin on her neck too.
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Old 02-23-2011, 04:53 PM
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Re: New picture - Critique please!

ah, true, thanks!
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Old 03-03-2011, 09:13 PM
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Re: New picture - Critique please!

Nice work,

I think it might be just a little oversmoothed... I'm feeling plastic rather than porcelain in the forehead and in the highlights around the eyes and nose. It's very close, but back off the smoothing maybe 5-10% and it would be perfect.

Also, I'm seeing piercing holes in the ears, a slight red spot under the lips, a couple of small scars on the chin and cheek. Don't even think about touching that mole though...I like it. Um... a couple stray hairs flying onto the background, you could remove the extra catch lights in the eyes (just leave the brighter ones) and maybe dodge the entire eye area just a bit to brighten them up.

All very nit-picky stuff...

Good work,

Cheers,
Michael
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