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Old 02-05-2011, 03:08 PM
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Band promo composite retouch

I've just completed a retouch on a band promo composite and it would be great to get some feedback!

High Res:
http://sambondphoto.deviantart.com/#/d38vfin

Breakdown:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/sambondphoto/5417044478/

Lots and lots of dodging and burning!!

Happy to answer any questions!
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Old 02-06-2011, 01:18 AM
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Re: Band promo composite retouch

Great job Sam - fellow on the far right has a pinch more red than the others and the front chappie could use a hiiite in the eye IMO. That said, I'd be well pleased to have that in my bag and I'm sure the band were thrilled with the result.
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Old 02-15-2011, 06:35 PM
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Re: Band promo composite retouch

Hi Sam,
My feeling is that the guy on the far right is still a little large in scale. Also, the third guy from the right seems to be shot with a shorter focal length, giving his face a more rounded feel, while the second guy from the left seems to be shot with the longest focal length (and should have the most distortion). Perhaps using the lens correction tool in photoshop can round out the 2nd guy's face or thin out the 3rd guy's face, or both. It's definitely a tricky composite though, and you've done a great job.
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