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05-12-2011, 03:38 PM
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| Critiques please Hello, I have been working on this image, courtesy of Cristian Mihai (I hope that's the correct spelling)  Link. http://www.retouchpro.com/forums/pho...back-raws.html Any input ideally what you don't like first would be more constructive for me as I am keen to learn  What I have tried to achieve is the lady looking into the sun, would be intrested to know if I am on the right track. many thanks for your time. Last edited by TopiToo; 05-12-2011 at 11:42 PM. Reason: text corrs  |
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07-20-2011, 02:01 PM
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| Re: Critiques please Hi, I like what you have done. I like that I can now see her eyes. You have brought in more detail in the dress and the ring which I think is a good thing. I am not sure that you have achieved the looking into the sun bit though. It appears to me that she is looking into a white electric light. That might be because of the white background - not sure. If she were looking into the sun I think the picture would be warmer. |
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