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Old 07-31-2011, 10:17 AM
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Hi everyone,

0Would like to know what you think of the result.

I posted the first attempt in image help because of a problem with the hair on her forehead. Thanks to Vernon's advice I think it's allready improved.

Original:
http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...yoriginal.jpg/

After:
ttp://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/69/beautyafter.jpg/

Thanks a lot!!

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Old 07-31-2011, 10:26 AM
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Sorry 'after' link is incorrect, should be:


http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images...autyafter.jpg/

Last edited by fen; 07-31-2011 at 12:08 PM. Reason: wrong link
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Old 08-03-2011, 10:47 PM
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Hi fen: I think that's a hard image to work with... Although your retouch looks much better than the original, i guess you have some more work to do, specially on her face and hair, they still look to sharp. Try to even out the transitions, not an easy task on this one, with all those colors, but specially her forehead needs to be softer, and stray hairs need healing... Her back looks fine to me... I hope i didn't sound too harsh, keep up the good work...
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Old 08-04-2011, 04:19 AM
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Hi Bonappetitit,

Thank you very much for your feedback. I'll work the hair and forehead a bit more.

Don't worry about being to harsh! I need absolute honesty to improve. I would like to work as a retoucher in a couple of month so it's very important to know if I'm good enough before showing my portfolio.

What did you mean by 'her back looks fine to me'? You think I should have left it they way it was in the original (withaout blemishes ofourse)?

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Old 08-05-2011, 12:47 PM
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Hi Bonappetitit,

Thank you very much for your feedback. I'll work the hair and forehead a bit more.

Don't worry about being to harsh! I need absolute honesty to improve. I would like to work as a retoucher in a couple of month so it's very important to know if I'm good enough before showing my portfolio.

What did you mean by 'her back looks fine to me'? You think I should have left it they way it was in the original (withaout blemishes ofourse)?

Regards,

Fen

I meant your work there is fine! No further retouch needed...
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