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Wedding postprocessing idea, critique needed

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Old 10-30-2011, 06:10 AM
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Re: Wedding postprocessing idea, critique needed

Thanks guys! My client just loved this photograph ) Young people is more open to this experimental approaches to photography)
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Old 10-30-2011, 08:56 AM
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Re: Wedding postprocessing idea, critique needed

Originally Posted by menthol View Post
Personally I would say the picture looks as if it is about the other two pple (lady in blue and a man in black) when in fact we should be focusing on the ones whose wedding it is. My assumption is that the two in white are the ones wedding.
Can you not get another picture in which their faces are seen more??

I do not mean to diss but that's my honest thought.
ditto...but actually imho (lady in blue and a groom).
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Old 01-04-2012, 09:06 PM
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Re: Wedding postprocessing idea, critique needed

Watch the mask or dodging on the girls leg. Its infringing onto the ground. Also since you seem to be going for a high key look, drop the contrast/hdr look some (the exposure now feels inconsistent and fake), and try blowing out the bg more. That will help keep the focus on the people.
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