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Mermaid Portraiture Critique please

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Old 10-07-2011, 12:44 PM
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Cool Mermaid Portraiture Critique please

I admit, I'm a newbie, feel free to critique with ways I can improve. Greatly appreciated! http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio...59337#25259337
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Old 10-10-2011, 01:24 AM
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Re: Mermaid Portraiture Critique please

Model is fine, make-up is great.

Now, lose the necklace, lose the harsh light, get some full-lengths and get that girl in the water! It's not far away ;-). Underwater shots in a pool would be cool too.
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Old 01-04-2012, 10:12 PM
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Re: Mermaid Portraiture Critique please

Too on-camera flash. smooth hard shadow on the nose (2nd image) and light paint in some directional light for form and contrast.
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