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Old 11-03-2011, 09:53 AM
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football player.

Hi!
I really love composites, Here is one of a fotballplayer. I hope you enjoy it. every little opinion about the picture is welcome, I would love to here what you like and what you don´t like.
if there is any questions I would love to answer them.
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http://www.mimbild.se/transport/peter/johan_klar.jpg
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Old 11-04-2011, 05:42 AM
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Re: football player.

Very nice. What settings did you use to get the tone? What did you do to generate the light beams? thanks
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Old 11-05-2011, 10:47 PM
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Re: football player.

Kind of cool. looks some HDR going on there. Not overblown, but just enough.
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Old 11-07-2011, 12:35 AM
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Re: football player.

Thanks for your opinions. they make me happy.
the colourtone is made out of one curve layer. in the blue chanel I have raised the dark parts a little and the light parts I have pressed down a little. this make the dark parts a little more blue and the light parts a little more yellow. then
I have take two fill layer, solid color and make one yellow in blend mode color and one magenta in blend mode soft light. then I played around with the opacity.

the light beams is made of one fill layer, gradient. it´s a little bit hard to explain in text, because there is so many things to play around with, if you want I can make a little video tutorial about it.

jcmartel, you´re absolutely right about the HDR, the platform in the background is HDR. not much, just a little bit to make it interesting.

I´m sorry for my bad english, let me know if there is something you don´t understand.
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Old 11-07-2011, 05:50 AM
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Re: football player.

thanks for the feedback...I video would be great if you have the time
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Old 01-04-2012, 10:00 PM
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Re: football player.

The black levels seem incorrect under the seats... Too blue. Blacks should be consistent. I realize they are behind the flare, so if you like that look, match the subject better. One way or another the blacks need to come together.
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