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Old 11-16-2011, 11:51 PM
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Young affraid or sorrow?

Newby on your forum, i decide to post two pictures that i have done this year. i tried to show a different atmophere from them. making them in BW with tint for one.
They come with large photos, I cut out the characters and have them enlarged. I tried to reduce the maximun grain, rendering skin smoother and finally added a background for the second.
I welcome your feedback on these two photos

thank for all

(sorry for my poor english.)
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Old 11-20-2011, 11:27 PM
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Re: Young girl afraid or sorrow?

Hello again to all.
I attached the original photo 2, taken during a village festival, so you can compare.
The hardest part for me was cutting the hair on the upper left side (I see few defaults). It is true that cutting dark - dark or light - light is not necessarily the easiest to do. How well do you manage that?
Then I applied a bottom and placed my composition in Color Efex with choices like a cold blue.
For the first photo taken with friends, the same principle.
What can you add, remove or edit these two pictures?
Thank you for your comments.

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Old 11-21-2011, 02:03 PM
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Re: Young affraid or sorrow?

booveepee, Welcome to RetouchPRO

Hope you enjoy your stay here and make lots of friends.

Poke around, offer help, have fun!

Interesting compositions... Nice work !
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