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Old 11-20-2011, 11:21 PM
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Today I propose three new compositions made ​​from photos taken of my daughter (my favorite model). They are all three of a different composition and reflects my mood.
I used Photoshop and Nik Software. Also, for Avatar, a tutorial on the web helped me a lot.
What do you think, your comments are welcome.
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Old 11-21-2011, 02:24 PM
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I like what you do!..

The only comment I would make is on the first Pic... there's a lot of distracting bright area under the eyes.. my sample below is NOT an example of how to crop.. Rather, I would probably use a wide oblong vignette just revealing the eyes... IF the eyes are to be the focus point... in my opinion I think they should POP more...

after clicking the GIF.. give it a couple seconds to see the change after some selective sharpening and whitening of the eyes..
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