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Old 11-30-2011, 03:45 PM
spinq spinq is offline
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New retouch attempt

Photo and retouching is mine, as before. Model made her own makeup.

Any pointers would be appreciated, e.g. as to what should i focus on.

Before and after pictures included
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Old 12-07-2011, 05:59 PM
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Re: New retouch attempt

Hey, I'm no expert here, just a beginner but I wanna help

Great picture first of all.

What I would do is maybe lighten up the image, especially around the eyes - I think the shadows dominate the face a bit.

Maybe you could, at risk of sounding like a hitman "take care" of some of the stray hairs. Easily done with a bit of spot healing.

Great stuff, keep it up!
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