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Opinion on beauty retouch please!

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Old 01-15-2012, 04:53 PM
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Opinion on beauty retouch please!

Hello, I have one more semester left in school and am trying to find an internship in New York but need to get a solid photography/retouching portfolio together! If anyone could please critique / offer any suggestions on how to improve this i would greatly appreciate it!! Thank you



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Old 01-15-2012, 05:02 PM
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Re: Opinion on beauty retouch please!

Try to get the crop right in camera, I almost never crop my images afterwards.

Chin and the area under lips is looking way too red, as weel as the front of the shoulder.

Jaw line is spotty, could use some dnb.

Lighten the under-eye area of her right eye.

Her top right rib is sticking out, remove it, or smooth it.

Very nice job on the hair.
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Old 01-15-2012, 05:44 PM
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Re: Opinion on beauty retouch please!

I definitely agree with your comments, Thanks for the input!
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Old 01-17-2012, 07:29 AM
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Re: Opinion on beauty retouch please!

Hello and welcome to RTP. My first impression is to much red glow on her face. The area above the left eye has a red spot that I don't think should be there.
Under that eye brow needs work.
I like how you brighten her eyes.
This is just to add to the above post.
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