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Old 03-29-2012, 03:24 PM
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Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

It is not the final so I would love some input.
Thanks in advance.
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Old 03-29-2012, 03:33 PM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

Hmmm...about what, dear? :-)
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Old 03-29-2012, 03:44 PM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

Sorry I don't know why it didn't post the image at first
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Old 03-30-2012, 04:25 AM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

beautiful shot...depending on where this was made for...imho you could remove birthmarks, fix the crease and the slight bump on the left shoulder,fix the redish transition on the right arm/shoulder, remove the skinspots(don'tknow the right words for them)on the left elbow, fix the top at the armpits/replace with skin, liquify the hips and rightside, add some contrast and sharpness...
Just my 2 cents.
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Old 04-03-2012, 12:07 AM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

Hey Capice,
Thank you for the feedback!
We ended up going a completely different route with the story. It is now a very metallic high contrast black and white. I did do some liquifying and removed a few of the birth marks. I think actually I know that the redness and weird marks that you were seeing was due to the compression of this site.....only allowed 100k files. It was compressed at 60% and I think it was like 700px across...the original is obviously much larger lol. I will post the story as soon as it is out and I get the go ahead. Until then you can see this version that was not compressed but around the same size at http://www.jdclosser.com/newyorkcityretoucher.html
If you get a sec let me know what you think.
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JD
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Old 04-03-2012, 07:40 AM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

Hi JDClosser,
I think you've done a good job! I'm not sure if it's just the compression you talked about, but on the LowRes you posted you have some green/yellowish tone going on in the 1/4 tones on her right arm and some on her right shoulder. Also, I would fix the red tint on her left side as capice noticed.

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Old 04-03-2012, 10:51 AM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

Hi JD, could be my screen but also on your website the redishtransition is visible for me...the shot is great but the postprocessing could be enhanced imho...
I would fix the top at the armpits/replace with skin, liquify the hips and rightside, add some contrast and sharpness...
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Old 04-08-2012, 01:39 PM
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Re: Love to hear some feedback on my latest edit

Only thing I can find is that you are DNBing to broadly, try to make it more local, don't fix if it ain't broke.
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