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Old 05-21-2012, 05:29 PM
jphilsantos jphilsantos is offline
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Please tell me what you think about my retouching. How could I improve it, my goods and bads.

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Old 06-08-2012, 11:05 AM
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Re: Judge me

There isn't too much edited here.
Good: I like the upped contrast mostly, you did a good job on the arm and the smoothing.

I would remove the toe line on her left foot. There is a distinctive line on her ankles seperating a tonal difference from her legs to her feet, her feet need to be matched in tone to her legs for a more even appearance.

This one is purely opinion but I feel shading on her face is too deep for the scene she is in. It seems too lite outside for her hair to cast such a deep shadow.
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Old 06-08-2012, 11:08 AM
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Oh yeah also, the people removed in the background is good, but I would also take out the tree or whaever it is that's going straight up through the back of her head.
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Old 06-08-2012, 11:32 AM
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The Sky is white and appears washed out.
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Old 06-08-2012, 05:47 PM
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Re: Judge me

Thank you for your honest comments I really appreciate it.
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Old 09-09-2012, 11:44 PM
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Maybe add some fill light so her face isn't so dark
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