RetouchPRO

Go Back   RetouchPRO > Technique > Critiques
Register Blogs FAQ Site Nav Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read


Critiques The place to get serious, in-depth analysis and opinions of your work

Composite

Reply
 
Thread Tools
  #1  
Old 10-31-2012, 01:46 PM
LoicRomer LoicRomer is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2012
Posts: 3
Composite

http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8474/8...2efa2a26_o.jpg

Hello, Here is one of my latest composite!

It was made from 4 of my pictures... sky, road, graffiti and caracter!

I wanted some of you guys input!

What should i work on?

Thanks
Reply With Quote top
  #2  
Old 11-01-2012, 12:32 PM
capice capice is offline
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2012
Posts: 178
Re: Composite

I think it can do with a bit of work.
the grafitywall is too much in focus and doesn't blend in with the bridgepillars at all.
I love the texture and tone of the bridge but the subject is too clean, it doesn't match with the surrounding lighting(too much of a studioshot).
The sky is too dominant.
Just my 2 cts
Reply With Quote top
  #3  
Old 11-01-2012, 01:36 PM
LoicRomer LoicRomer is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2012
Posts: 3
Re: Composite

Thx for your response, your absolutely right!
Will try to work on those points!
Reply With Quote top
  #4  
Old 12-09-2012, 03:33 AM
cristian_may cristian_may is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Oct 2010
Location: Italy
Posts: 6
Re: Composite

Maybe the graffiti wall is also a little out of perspective.
Reply With Quote top
  #5  
Old 12-11-2012, 11:27 AM
HeavyTheory's Avatar
HeavyTheory HeavyTheory is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Jan 2012
Location: North America
Posts: 23
Re: Composite

I would say grunge up and desaturate the hero and also tone down the sky - a bit too dark IMHO. Nice start thought
Reply With Quote top
  #6  
Old 01-01-2013, 08:18 PM
DarkJamie DarkJamie is offline
Junior Member
 
Join Date: Dec 2012
Location: San Diego
Posts: 17
Re: Composite

Your masks on the sky are too tight. You can see a halo between the sky and the overpasses.
Reply With Quote top
Reply

  RetouchPRO > Technique > Critiques


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Help with composite petersweden Photo Compositing 3 01-11-2012 02:47 AM
Help with composite petersweden Photo Compositing 6 01-04-2012 06:22 PM
Preparation for an ambitious composite shoot! harryduns Photography 4 11-11-2011 04:15 AM
A composite from a Newb GMDee Critiques 6 10-04-2011 05:59 AM
Shadows on composite images... jeppe Photo Retouching 5 12-16-2010 09:18 AM


All times are GMT -6. The time now is 06:34 PM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2017, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
SEO by vBSEO ©2011, Crawlability, Inc.
Copyright © 2016 Doug Nelson. All Rights Reserved