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Old 02-10-2013, 07:47 PM
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Hello, This is my second time uploading my work here.

I retouched one of my favorite beer.

I downloaded the original file to practice from Google.

and started playing around with some ice cube photos and brushes to get this effect.

Please let give me any feedback please!

Thanks
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Old 02-11-2013, 01:33 AM
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Re: Need FEED BACK FOR MY 2nd TRY!

The cut-out is not good - check out the original shape especially around the shoulders of the bottle. The original highlights have lost their relevance against the dark green background and the ice, although transparent, needs more density. The reflection is clumsy and I would expect to see some condensation/liquid around the base of the bottle. It's clear where you are going with this but the execution needs refinement.
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Old 02-11-2013, 02:21 AM
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Re: Need FEED BACK FOR MY 2nd TRY!

Up against that green the bottle would take on more of a greenish tint toward the edges, especially if the background was reflecting back on it, causes further green backlighting. Even if you determine the line is where you want it, you must compensate for the incorrect fresnel effect (influenced by a different environment) here.
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Old 02-11-2013, 08:31 AM
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Re: Need FEED BACK FOR MY 2nd TRY!

creatively looks like you are on the right track, just execution need improving.
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Old 02-11-2013, 12:48 PM
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Re: Need FEED BACK FOR MY 2nd TRY!

thank you all for the feedbacks!
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Old 02-11-2013, 10:36 PM
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I tried again..I know your feedbacks are really helpful but I really wish to see sombody showing me infront of me and fix the problems..
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Old 02-12-2013, 02:11 AM
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Re: Need FEED BACK FOR MY 2nd TRY!

LOL - yeh I think we'd all like someone to fix our problems hooney! They're called employees BTW.
Anyway, the image is coming along well. Think about adding some water drops or condensation though.
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Old 02-12-2013, 10:02 AM
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thanks repairman!
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