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Old 11-18-2013, 09:33 PM
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Re: Newbie from London 4 critique

I agree. Cooking with gas. Just a suggestion - to reiterate Janet, I would know down that highlight on the left cheek a bit. Makes it look almost like a swollen area. You might be able to accomplish simply by burning a bit and adjust color to be less magenta and closer to the area around it. Also... while I am being picky. Take out the neck crease lines in her neck more fully. But heh... you made dramatic differences from first post!
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Old 12-11-2013, 12:05 AM
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Thanks everyone for your advice, have attached my final plus one with a some split toning
Finally you are heading towards the right path!
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