| This one is good, but not as good as your two previous posts. I think that women expect more "softening" in the editing process. We wear make-up to soften our skin tone, etc. And there are books that have sections devoted to editing women's portraits as opposed to portraits in general. I think the problem may have arisen that while softening, you lost some of the natural lines that should be there--for example, her head is turned but the neck doesn't show the lines that even a young woman would have.
One other thing I noticed on a repeat look. There's a halo effect around the top of her hair--she's not as well blended as you usually do.
Still--I've enjoyed seeing the portraits you post. They are extremely good. This one is still very good--just not quite as much as the last two. |