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Old 09-16-2003, 01:40 PM
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do your worst!

Here's a collage i did for my niece, a big Mariah carey fan, somehow i think it could be improved, any comments would be appreciated.
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Old 09-16-2003, 08:56 PM
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Great use of the hair and the neck too tie the images together. Also great use of the different tilts of the head for movement and balance. The only area I see for more thought is the bottom middle where that undifined wing/triangle shape doesn't make sense. Love the charcoal feel and the fact that you have a consistant tone in terms of darkness of the charcoal feel thoughout. Bottom left face might have a little more splotchiness than the other faces ...

Good job,
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Old 09-25-2003, 02:31 PM
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Thanks Roger..... I appreciate your feedback
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